Comments : Dead Little Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Lola

    Well, its ok, but you should leave the last three lines out.

  • 16 years ago

    by neverisme

    You dont have to leave anysing cause true feelings and emotions are not methodical
    just write and keep writing and dont give a damn for poetry rules

    by da way am idiote but i still belive in wara i say and wara i think