Comments : Forvever Falling

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    It was short but still wonderful. It's also something that many can relate to. When some say 'I love you' it just doesn't sound pure or sincere. 5/5
    cheers, josh

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    Serves that guy right! Leave him! He is so insensitive to do that to you! I love the last two stanza

    "You nearly broke up our family
    And you didn't even care
    One day you will need me
    And I will not be there"

    This is very good! 5/5