Wow. that was really really powerful. nicely done, that was so... intense. In a good way. 5/5 for sure. <3

"Crash-
the earth falls into the great unknown
Scream-
everybody yells in pain- terror visibly shown" - great start. The rest of the poem is excellently written, too. I like the imagery that you created through the poem.
5/5

Unique poem, very impressive.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

Whoa! that was good! Good choice of words!..

WOW!!
Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D

WOW!!
Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D