Comments : The Story of Juan

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Nice poem! finaly you wrote one in here. good job. I feel bad for Juan though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,it was very sad , but the truth is it happens everyday in this sorry world ,and people let it go, Great write ,well written and well penned, excellent job on the details of the poem ,great job all around , your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,5/5

    P.S ..... We can talk anytime you like , thanks for sharing .

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Well written! nice work! it is sad! you had great details