Soo true!!!

Well penned

"However, this world less than perfect,
And we must all carry these burdens,"

This poem was filled with alot of truth, because you are right, the world is far from perfect. Life is just rolled up into a ball of tragedy. Great poem hey.

Take Care.

Good poem it was very truthfull and good keep it up
~danielle~

I like the topic, I can relate to this poem. It is very deep and true, and you wrote it with many emotions within the words.

Very deep and true. Topic is excellent and title is great. You expressed emotions superbly. This poem could be in the life poems category. Anyway this piece really deserves 5/5