Comments : The World and You

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lol, this one kind of made me laugh, i guess it was just the explanation marks ;p
    although it was short,
    it was still great :)
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    How thoughtful this piece is! The seeming theme of "One's Life is a mirror to oneself" captivated me. Although it didn't portray any imagery nor convey hidden codes, it certainly -did- struck a chord with me by being blunt and frank in nature. =] I hope you all the best!

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Its a process and part of life, change. For better and for worse I guess. Some people will never experience, or see what others will see. We percieve the world through our own eyes. This was a short poem but I liked it :)

    Take Care.