Comments : I need you

  • 12 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    You used poems really effectively here :]

    and it flows

    i wish you well with that cause :]

    i enjoyed this poem :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Sooo sad deep emotion....=[ i miss having someone to hold right now....but ne hoo good poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    The worst mistake i ever made
    was to walk out of you life
    if i had stuck around
    i could have been you wife

    These lines are really beautiful. You just need to correct the simple mistakes like "you(r)". Its very well written with strong flow of emotions. Its very beautifully penned in deed. 5/5 all the way. tc

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written sad poem, really deep and emotional. I like the flow and the choice of words in it.

  • 12 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Oh i can relate on this one and i can really feel the emotion in here..nice one, simple yet so touching!!Great job