You used poems really effectively here :]

and it flows

i wish you well with that cause :]

i enjoyed this poem :]

Sooo sad deep emotion....=[ i miss having someone to hold right now....but ne hoo good poem 5/5

The worst mistake i ever made
was to walk out of you life
if i had stuck around
i could have been you wife

These lines are really beautiful. You just need to correct the simple mistakes like "you(r)". Its very well written with strong flow of emotions. Its very beautifully penned in deed. 5/5 all the way. tc

Beautifully written sad poem, really deep and emotional. I like the flow and the choice of words in it.
5/5

Oh i can relate on this one and i can really feel the emotion in here..nice one, simple yet so touching!!Great job