I thought this was a very good poem
and it was very descirptive
and i thought it had a great ending

"Sitting upon her rusted swing set
She looks at her forget me not
Caressing the lavender-blue petals
Her tears fall upon the ancient green leaf"

favorite part ^^

i loved this part becuase of how you used
the colors as not just regular colors

you made them a certain color

5/5

Thats a great poem... It set a mood... I was touched and i hope that my poems can be as great as this. Its going in my favs ^_^ well keep up the good work... poems like these should beh published!!!
~*~Skye~*~