Ohhhhh like the opening line drew me right in, great work keep it up xxxx

Great writing!!! :)

A real sad poem with so much emotions. I like it very much like every poem of yours.

Really emotional and touching poem. Every stanza is greatly written, but I like third and fourth the most.
Keep up! 5/5

Hauntingly sad imagery. You did a nice job putting a tragic story to rhyme. The flow was good and the piece was heartfelt. Nice job!

This is what i find hard

"Never did anything wrong"

The confusion and hurt that a child must feel. Becuase they have never done anything to deserve that. So sad, and i can see mental image of it and its just too painful to imagine.

Kelly
xx

This one is so sad, specially the last stanza. You always have good way to write about emotions.
All is suppose to be well
isn't really what it seems
living in a dark world
life full of dead dreams.
^ my favorite stanza, powerful written.
Great job, it deserves 5/5