Dang great job. I got a qestion though. How does this relate back to the title. I'm a little confused lol.
-vino

It's nice, isn't it? ^^
I love the ending, the last two lines.
I can feel the emotion is this poem.
And your words sound great too.
Very nice poem. ^^
Keep up the good work. 5/5

Dear this is a lexically powerful poem. The only thing I would suggest is breaking up the last two lines to two stanzas. Your word choice is beautiful and the flow is also nice. Kepp up the good work 5/5. God bless you

With love
Fsams