I think this is ok, it definitely has great potential. couple of things, it's 'their' not 'there' in the beginning few lines. i'd try not to repeat the til dry, as is disrupts the flow. very good last line, very strong to match the beginning.

That is really sad
war is my least favorite thing,my aunts in iraq right now and i would love to have her back but that how those things go.
anyway this is good,5/5