Good language skills, and very good flow xx well done xx

Very deep full of meaning great write
5/5
laura

Well written, excellent word choice, great vocab, deep emotions, clear message. you have done an excellent job here, helpful hint:
try using caps only when important to utlize important words, or strong emotions. 5/5

If You Hadn't Picked That Fight
But Its Too Late Now
To Realize She Was Right
Its Your Own Anger And Sin
That Brought About This Plight

These are very beautiful lines dear. I really loved these lines and your whole poem. Its having a great flow and lexical quality. 5/5 all the way.
Tc