Wow very short but sweet 4.5 thats rounds up to a 5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This poem's truly greatly written, I like the choice of words and the emotions in it are really strong.
Sad but powerful poem.
5/5

Very beautifully written and strong. You made your emotions felt and the format was great. Keep writing.
cheers, josh

The pattern doesn't to be much appeal to me but the poem's still good. It expressed in a way, like you felt helpless and that you couldn't do anything about it. It's like they can't hear you and just do whatever they want to do. which hurts. 5/5

Very sad, and also very deep. I could feel the emotion. Although you chose a short poem style, you told plenty within it.