Comments : Cry cry ill never die

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Good poem, but you could correct copy/paste mistakes, it would make it easier to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awhh,
    yet another lovely poem.
    i only saw one mistake,
    "II'mweak now but just wait"
    just edit that.
    anyway great poem
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow another great poem by u

  • 16 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    A lot of people could probably learn from that one, really well written, and thank you for your comment on my poem, it means a lot to me. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I really like the concept of this poem.. Very well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    I really like this poem because it reminds me that its ok for me to cry when i want to hold it in. very good poem. and thank you, im against anorexia and bulimia too lol, even though i am anorexic and bulimic.