I liked this poem because it was different from many of the other poems of yours that I've read. I like the new style and the interesting structure to the whole poem. Great job. 5/5.

Wow, this is different...but nice

Ok, well it was different, and some advice, if you are gonna rhyme in a poem, rhyme through the whole thing, dont start rhyming and then stop, it makes the strucutre down graded, but non the less, this deserves a

5/5