I feel like that, this is good and i like it xxxx

Both sad nd dark..... i dunno y but i jus like it keep it up

Shes not alone :) and she never will be alone :) this a beautifull poem describing that most dreadfull of human feelings, lonelynes :) i enjoyed reading this and it made me smile just knowing that when i do feel alone im not :) 5/5

Again, too predictable rhymes, but despite that, whole poem is very emotional and greatly written. I've been through similar moment in my life. You can greatly pass the emotions to the reader, that makes your pieces very powerful and effective.