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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Okay in the last stanza.

    It should say though instead of thought. [In my opinion]
    And also instead of allot it should say a lot. Once again in my opinion.

    Just those small mistakes.

    Other than that it was a great poem.
    Thank you for your comment on my poem.
    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Your poem was good I liked the flow Your friend Lisa Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it, it's very descriptive and somehow touching, every stanza contains many emotions.
    The title is greatly related to the whole piece, you found excellent word to describe that girl's feelings.
    I think that a lot of people can relate to this one.