Beautiful my friend :)

When things look good
your happy to go
but let them go bad
I'm the first to know.

^^ That was amazing right there...Never realize how much stress we put our hearts under....they do feel everything hey?

Tracey, this was amazing...I'm kinda jealous that I didn't think of writing an idea like this...
Excellent work
Chelsey

Tracy,

I like how your poetry has evolved over the last couple of months. Your heart and soul is shown in each of your writes. I can trully feel your pain.

Well done, my friend.

Always,
Jeannie

And you thought my poem was good? My poem is crap compared to yours. this poem was so beautiful. *casee rae*

Aww, thats a very nice poem!

Aw such a different poem for you but very sweet

"and I promise you
I'll do my best."

I love it. Its amazing wha you can get through when you have no choice. I love this poem.

Kelly
xx