Comments : World of Freedom (Mr. President)

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "You are living proof that not everything is what it seems,
    because you are not what you said you would be."

    This was a beautifully penned poem, yet at the same time so sadly true. The problem with the world is that promises are made, but not carried out. We abuse the freedom we hold. A poignant write!

    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Wow, this is amazing, i really really dig it

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was an excellent poem, well pinned, wonderfully worded , you did a fine job on this one, keep it up , your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,5/5