Comments : Unseen

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    If you[the 1st person] feel that you are nothing for the guy, why the guy see you and pretend that you are not there and avoid you.. ^^
    I'm a lil confuse. ^^
    But it's a good poem overall.
    The flow was good.
    Nice.. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Love this. repeating the word unseen really hits ya... you should read mine >>>http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=892198