This is very sad!!

Very good writing though. Stanzas and everything =]

Thats a really good poem!
My favourite of all yours!
Can you read mine please?
xxxxxxx

The secnod and third verse are amazing.
Perfect. Love them.
The first and fourth, though, could use a bit of work.
The rhymes are a bit weak, but you stil lget your point across nicely, though.

Take care,
not-bulletproof.

I like this poem very much...it's really true and I understand you very well. You cannot control all that love does, and that is the beauty of it. It has a life of it's own and it helps you realize certain things.