Comments : Off to a bad start

  • 16 years ago

    by mimzy

    Sad but beautiful. love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "a land of [inadequacy]
    and [deception] and hate"

    This was, once again, a poignant piece, Marie. It doubtlessly struck a chord with me. I can tell how challenging it is to settle in a new and unusual place. You've portrayed your discomfort rather emotively. Well done, as always! I hope you all the best and take care; hang in there. 5/5 ~Marian