Comments : Waiting Room

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is better but there are soo many like funky letters its PISSING ME OFF MANNSS and its kinda weird how you talk about the airplane thing for like half of it and then it one stanza you talk about the marrige thing and then its like the end.. idk .. it needs more between but its much better than the last one