Great...i loved it.
mandy

Again VERY GOOD
but again the ending was
weak and it could have been better

but on a high note i loved it
the way you wrote about
the two different things that could be waiting for you

"Maybe there is an air balloon.
If there is, It would have a hole in it and plummet from the sky like guitar strings.. or a piano.hitting the perfect high note, then suddenly your finger slips.. hitting a very low and suddle note."

favorite stanza ^^

i think i will give this one

5/5

Ashley, to be honest.
I didn't know you had it in you.
To write so.. wonderfully.
With all this packed emotion and heart.
The flow, was different, but I liked it.
Usually standard is more of my thing.
The words did their flowing as well.
You kept on topic and you did great.
Overall Rating: 4.7/5