"The pain, the sorrow
Throw it away,
It doesnt hurt anymore,
As long as you stay" - my favorite stanza.
Good poem, I like the flow and rhymes.
Keep up! 5/5

This poem was excellent.You written it very well.Each stanza seems to go smooth.This is a beautiful penned poem.
All the best
and take care.

I desire ur style..i love the lyrics of ur poet its such very touching, very worded. i can say it really flowed well, from the start to the end it means so filled on very touchy words.. great job 5/5

I adore this cute work. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well. How you actually have penned this, along with the poignant emotions, is so sweet and adorable. I think you did a nice job and a rather fine effort with this piece. Well done. 5/5 ~ Marian

This Is A Beautifully Written Poem..Its Very Touching..5/5

I love it! great flow and once again...nice job

I like that poem. Good work. 5/5

Ravyn

It was so sweet and touching and you reflected your feelings so weel on this
But this mistakes occur here too

Baby, youre:you're or you are what I want,
Youre:you are or you're what I need.
I love you forever,
That I plead.

Take care
Laura

This poem is great, i feel the same way

Another great one! loved it. it had a lot of emotion that i could really feel. keep it up. 5/5!

I love this npoem it is nice keep it up u doing a good job :)