WOW fantastic.very well done.enjoyed it right through.great use of words x

Shattering sweet remembrance
Lost for the constant pain
The thoughts that whip me in the night
Come tearing once again.
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Jeannie I absolutely love this stanza and especially this line ..... The thoughts that whip me in the night
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Such a unique line Jeannie and it just stood right out for me.

So rest in peace, sweet memories
Your death, the final sin
No longer can I weep for thee
For heartache's settled in.
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This ending stanza made me say Awwwww ... it really did !

Wonderfully penned Auntie !
Luanne

Jeannie dear.

What a beautiful sad poems you penned here, touching yet well emotions.... I love the way how you express them, Beautifully ended!

Bert.

Jeannie
Your talent always leaves me in awe. Excellent piece. So full of sad emotions. Imagery and word choices are wonderful.

So rest in peace, sweet memories
Your death, the final sin
No longer can I weep for thee
For heartache's settled in.

This ending really touched my heart.
~CLAP~~CLAP~
Love Cindy

This a magnificent poem.... So very well written... each stanza is so meaningful! great work!

Another well written poem. good work once again :) i loveddd it. haha