Aww thats sad xx good writing xx

This poems shows that u r really depressed. words just came out of ur heart. liked it. keep writing.

Deep emotion strong sense of state very well writtten great job
laura

A strong emotional vibe...some interesting imagery nothing actually intense but fitting with the emotional aspect. It's sad but for some reason I think with a word or two added this could also be a darker piece. Still the lonely/depression thing works cuz of the emotions portrayed.
~Faith-less