Great selection of words and a beautiful way of expressing your love...pretty unique & thats what keeps this one out of so many other love poems.

liked it a lot

all the best and take care

Omg! this was such a good poem!!! it was sooooo beautiful. i loved every line! havent read a poem of yours in ages!!! great job. very touching xx

Excellent :) What a wonderful piece you have penned. I truely loved this. Imagery and word choices were awesome.

Greenflies now farewell a due
God I pray to prosper thee
For I am still thy lover true
Come once again and love me...

It is very hard to highlight one stanza in this piece. It is all amazing.
~BRAVO~
Take care Cindy

Beautiful write, it flowed really well, the wording was advanced and great, and i loved the subject. great write.

Hi Bert,

What can I say that has not already been said before. This was a true masterpiece. Loved the style. Very heartfelt and full of emotion.

The yearnings of the heart may one day bring our death, but the fair of the soul could spare us.

Wonderful and very beautifully done, dear friend.

Always,
Jeannie

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

This is very beautiful.....so perfect....love the Old English style....amazing! All the best, Debbie