*Begins to read* Aw this is cute... *Reads all* Wow, thats a good poem, my jaw dropped when I read:
"While mummy's on drugs and you don't know your father"
I liked this poem a lot, short and simple

Personally, the last stanza was the best. it really ended this poem well and was execellent. the words was fantastic and the repetiveness really worked wonders with this poem.

5/5 David