Nice one

Thats intense. I love the lines:

in to me , straight in to my heart.

you won the battle , now you are ruling me.

It makes the last line "still you arent aware" so much more deep and applicable to others. Great poem 5/5

Beautiful :) very nice good poem to post on here :) this site is manly for love and death :) i deal with the death ppart ;)

Nice job Honey, i liked it ALOT i think u did GREAT on it! keep up ur talent, and keep on wirtting. 5/5 always
Kate

thanks for ur comments

Lovely Poem =]
Just Wonderful!
Very well penned and well written.
Good Work.

Keep SMiling =]

Awesome, gud poem! i love it. keep it up

Good work. keep it up