Very clever wording, liked this poem, god work. bek

Very well written..I like it..I understand the meaning of this poem..very hard words to express..good joB..

But that is the chance you have to take to find love...is to be vulnerable .....maybe you would like my poems checkem out ...good stuff

Wow, great poem and clever style of writing. If it's any consoluation, I hope things get better for you

Wow, i love it. it's great. keep writing so i can keep reading. great jod hun, keep it up. 5/5

Great poem, i love the repitition style