Wow lots of emotion good poem
keep it up
carly

This is a really good poem.Full of emotion.Keep on writing.

Kelsie

I would like tell the 5-0 or somethin

WOW, i thought it was very powerful

(i think u let me read it in language class, lol)

but anyway

it flowed ok

and some of the rhyming was a little forced

but it was still very good, 5/5

love u