Cant help but cry for the brave who die in iraq everyday for this country and the president doesnt seem to care, wonderful etheree cindy, been awhile since i done this style, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep the new styles coming!!!

Theme which has been very nicely presented. Great selection of words. Very powerful theme converted in such effective pattern of poetry. You are talented and you know that by now...dont you?

keep writing sweetie

all the best and take care

Cindy you seek to amaze me. Excellent poem of the lost that occurs in someone else's messes, wonderfully written , love it always a pleasure reading your writings, great job my friend, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Beautiful tribute to one of our finest sons....what a tragic loss for the world. To think the loss of these bright young spirits now numbers over 3500 from the US alone.....a shame.....you have done an amazing job in this etheree....Love, Debbie

Ur so creative, great dedication well done xox sam

There should be something or someone who could put an end to those monsters who stupidly hailed themselves as leaders and generals of their respective countries. It's too horrid. What's more saddening to know is that they do not even care. I suppose that's how unfair it is--"No sacrifice; no victory." But, even then, there is no real victory. Both sides have, after all, suffered tremendous damage in all aspects of being.

As for the poem, it was written in a rather eloquent manner, with a flow so fluid in the tongue. Enchanting. =] I hope you all the best and take care! Love, Debbie (^^,)

Excellent Cindy, well expressed and very well written. Beautiful Etheree with strong flowing feelings and written in memory of Eric. May he rest in piece and God bless you dear. TC

With love
Fsams

A very thoughful poem.No matter which side wins or looses war, its sure defeat of humanity.A great poem and dedication.

take care
chavii.

Mam my heart is full cant say cos it was so sad and ya just as a friend can you plz comment on my poems am new here 5\5 for you

This poem is so sad but yet sooo true, its hapening all the time and still nothing is done about it!.... u are an amazing writer great job!
~rach xXx 5/5

The title is an excellent fit for the poem, and i didnt realize that until the end...an amazing tribute to the fallen men overseas...amazing work cindy

andrew