This is really pretty allanah, but it really seems to be completely unfinished, as if you hadn't ever finished writing it and just posted it anyway. so i would do something about that if i were you. :D but it really is sweet and beautiful, the flow is really good as well so i'll give a 5/5
gabriella

I love this. It's beautiful and full of emotion... It's lovely. (just like you) 5/5

(Need another hint?)
Ayanda