I understand.
this is sad.
and full of emotion!
keep it up!

Keep your head up and all will be okay5/5..great poem...keep writing!!! check out my poems too...

The beginning in this two stanzas was the best part for me:
My dreams have gone
And terror has come to stay
Hope has been broken
And death has found a way

You think I am breathing
You think I am fine
But inside I am gasping
And losing my mind

The whole poem was very well done! you have a way of using simple vocabulary but it still makes the reader really feel the emotion behind the poem and be able to realte to it. i LOVE that!
keep it up!
--Viola

Again WOW!! i kno how that feels and it hurts sooo much.

This poem is great....the flow is perfect and the rhyming was excellent...5/5....

and sorry about the wait on your comments.. my computer has been messed up.

Good poem, very sad. 5/5

I think this piece is related to by everyone at some point in their life. Great emotion and depth. Very powerful read. 5/5

marcella

5/5 pretty good...I love it!

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