Just express what all what u feels,, and later on u may feel better.. so dont afraid to express it, well great expressing ur feelings in this poet,, u wrote it very well and it has a great flow.. 5/5

This poem was good...but its not your best... you were putting past tense with present tense and it just threw the flow off... but overall it was just an okay poem..4/5 on this one.

This one sounds so sincere, and it is written nicely, with a lot of emotions. You created good atmosphere in it, but you could use some metaphors( that's just my suggestion) for some of your emotions.

Wow very well written. The flow and rhythm was excellent. On the second stanza last line I think you should put 'knew' to know and capitalize all your I's lol something small. But overall I love it very good at expressing what you feel. Keep it up!