Very nicely Done!!!

God bless u

Hassan
Beautiful poem. Imagery is awesome :)
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

This is ...frikken awesome.
I LOVE this.
I found it to be original and unique in concept, and a very refreshing read.
The flow was perfect throughout the entire piece and once again the imagery painted created very vivid pictures.

Holding hands is such a simple thing, but theres many complexities that lay behind it..so much meaning, and you captured many of its aspects in this writing here...amazing work!

Wow! Beautiful poem. It is very original and greatly written. Form of this piece is unique and excellent. Atmosphere that you create with majestic wording is superb. 5/5

This is really really good ...

Beautiful repitition, good flow, great expression. Love Greta xo