Thats was an awsome poem seriously good message to it u did a really good job keep it up 5/5 always
Kate~

Hey good job it was awesome
danielle

Great poem i like this one more then the other i find it talks about the more important things and i belive everything you wrote here is very important i think more people should read this good job

keenan

The last stanza did the poem a lot of good :))
Well thought out, really meaningful ^_^