Comments : Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "but i deserve someone better, someone new.
    So i say good bye and have a good life
    because this is the last time your going to c me,
    this is my goodbye!!!"

    I could really feel the emotion in this poem. You've really just let your feelings of anger out, which has made this poem really affective. It takes a lot of strength to realise that you deserve better and to stand up for yourself. Great poem!

    Take Care,
    All the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    That is good keep writing