This was alright. The last couple of stanzas were a bit long, try shortening them. Other than that the flow was good. Most can relate to this. Keep it up!

Sometimes its the poems that just burst from head to paper that are the best.
They are always so full of pure emotion and i find those the best to read.
This is an example of them =)
You should be proud of it
5/5
*Gem*

This was an emotion-felt poem. I like it. Although it's not really the best poem, but it's ok. Keep up the wonderful work.

Feel free to comment some of my poems.

*DARLENA*