Comments : I'm Sorry I Can't Be The Girl You Want

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I love this.
    The lesson in it is so true && something all girls should learn. You should never change for anyone... they should love you for who you are.

    "A girl whose not perfect and whose never gonna be.
    I'm just me.
    And that's all I can be.
    Either you accept me the way I am
    Or your not worth my time"

    Wonderful doll, I love it!!
    5.5 Keep writing. [Please] :D

    - Steph

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaetaj

    Wow...i should really learn to accept myself like you... nice poem. keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, I think that many people can relate to it, and I am one of them.
    You picked excellent topic, and I really enjoyed in this piece.
    Good work, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem....i can relate..and its hard not being the girl he wants..i know from expierence and it sucks....

    there are a few mistakes in here though..just thought i'd let you know...

    "whose" should be changed to who's ...and in the last line "your" should be changed to you're.

    but other than that , this is pretty good. 5/5.