Comments : The Randomness of Shooting Stars

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely written once again you penned here my friend...how wonderful of nature...i love how you express them, simply but breathtaking!

    have a good weekend, take care.

    Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a wonderful poem. Brings a smile to my face remembering the night sky.

    The randomness of shooting stars
    Is still a mystery, I see
    But like those stars that shine above
    The night's enchanted me.

    I love the ending stanza,
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful poem! I love it because I am a huge fan of the stars! :) They are my favorite creation! The title was very catchy! I really enjoyed this piece!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    From which direction do they come
    And when they fall, where do they land
    Do stars that shoot across the sky
    Get swept inside God's gentle hands
    ^^^
    Jeannie I love this stanza!

    You are indeed the queen of uniqueness .... you never stop amazing me with the topics that flow so freely from your pen, dear friend.

    Wonderful .... wonderful read Auntie!
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a wonderful write, it makes one think of the wonder of it all. Thank you for your excellent write. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    What an amazing poem! I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    :) you can deffinatly write all types of poems and still come out sounds good. there is one line in here i found didn't fit like the rest though

    "On these I look then make a wish"

    other wise it was great