Excellent poem, flowed nicely, well written ,wording was great, you did an outstanding job on this piece, you can feel the passion in it , marvelous write, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

Nice poem.
Your style and the form that you have is very unique.
5/5
_Amber_

It was short but so full of emotions..keep up the good work

***AMAZING!!*** well done!

A short, sweet and a lovely poem...

Great words...beautiful poem...
keep them coming...
5/5
kissssssss

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

Nazeer

We shall be thankful to you, if we both could add each others names in our favourite list which is very much commendable and appreciated, on a friendly manner.

Moreover,We will look your poems and will read, rate and comment therein with pleasure.... So, whenever there is a new poem, please without any hesitations let us know to enable us to read and do the needful therein.

Awaiting for your positive answer..

Thanking you once again,

We,

Luzan and Nazeer
(joining in poem writing

VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

luzaN

I love it : )

5/5

Wow loved the poem love how you started then went back to the origenal line almost 5/5 thanx for reading my poem