I like this very much.

Wonderful, you grapsed the meaning and worked with it...hope to hear more from you.

AMEN! This is a great poem. I love all your poetry. This poem I like because it is a lesson that absolutely everyone in the world need a lesson in.

Yup, still lovin your poetry! lol

The message of this poem is great, and whole piece is very deep.
You lack a flow in some parts, you should work on it a little bit.
The ending is excellent, the last stanza is my favorite.
4/5 from me

Beautiful, i can't say it any better this poem is perfect and you wrote it so good. I wish they all could read this as in boys/men.