Great Job!!!

This poem was so agonizingly painful! But it was worded perfectly. I mean you seem so helpless in this piece and I could feel the pain written about here. My fav line is -
I'm numb to the world.
Especially to you -
I could really feel the bitterness in this line. Great job, Charisma! 5/5 as always!
~Midnight Sun

Very nice poem u might like my poem"I WISH"

Your poems are stunning. Your sad one's tragically beautiful and this is no exception. I beleive your becoming one of my favorites. This is painfully good. I love it.
<3
L.C

Amazing. What else is to be expected from your writing though? You always speak from the heart and I absolutely love that about your poetry. You don`t make it too personal, but it is personal at the same time...still so easy for the reader to relate to and put themselves in that situation. The beginning pulled me in right away and then ending was perfect. The question served well on the second last line and the last line was just like BAM lol..good job, Hun.

"The sun's ripped away,
So much like my heart.
The sky's breaking up
As my world falls apart."

^^ Effing LOVE those lines, oh man !

5.5
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Great love poem :)
well done

Wow great work!
keep it up:)
-Lisa

I think the first two stanzas were my favorite. I liked the last line, it was simple, yet effective. Overall it was a pretty good poem, I can't find anything I don't like about it anyway.

Brad