Sweet memory or sweat memory?Ok, well it was actually a really good poem ,i loved it.The only think i had a problem with was in this stanza...

"Here i am laying to waste, left to
rot never to taste Love"

It doesnt rhyme like everything else.But the poem is so good it doesnt matter.

Holy moly i loved it all the way top job!!!!!
~Taz~

Great poem. It is full off emotions. I like your vocab and atmosphere is incredible. Well done,5/5

What a great poem, sad but great.