Nitin
What a wonderful piece you have penned. Love the imagery.

I am thunder
With no sound
I am lightening
That never comes around
I am a storm
With no power

Love these lines they are so powerful.
Awesome write :)
Love Cindy

What a brilliant poem, great imagery throughout! i like the final lines, where love is brought into it, i think that works really well.

Amy x

Yet another beautiful penned, just simply but very inspirations written.... "For works come from the mind, grow by study and art... But tone leaps from the inner self, revealing the state of the heart."

Best wishes, Bert.

Nitin, its brilliant ,simply mindblowing.Each line has such twist meaning, so dark and yet so real somewhere like spell of black magic lol.Enjoyed it lot.

Reading this piece induced a sense of refreshing sensation within me. I, in fact, find it rather terrific and paradoxical. =]

A poetic success, nonetheless. Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

Debbie

I love this. Just the way you wrote it. Simple, yet very powerful. A truly amazing write. 5/5

` Liz =]

Nitin......interesting write....like the rhyming and flow...

I am angel
Of my own death
I am master
Of your creation
I am sword
In the name of salvation
I am tide
Of your memories
I am your love
Release me please

Love these lines^.....nicely done.....take care, Debbie

Perfection! This is REALLY great. I didn't think this style would be really pleasing but wow! I loved it! 5/5

Indeed, you are.

I am master
Of your creation
I am sword
In the name of salvation
I am tide
Of your memories
I am your love
Release me please
^^^
Amazing lines Nitin ....
Very unique and I loved the rhyme scheme !
Well done
Luanne

Darkly wonderful my friend 5/5 your friend ben thompson

Wow fantastic,loved it,you are so talented!!loved the rhyming 5/5

Very nice! oh my god Nitin~ after a long time i logged on this site and read ur poems. they are better. i have stopped writing but guess that all other are still writing. its too gud! lagta hai mujhe fir se shuru karni padegi poetry .......(that same boring one!) hehehe

anywaz take care
bye

luv

Enjoyable read...short simple and powerful...lot of meaning .....keep up the good work 5/5 please vote and comment on "GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "MY TEARS"

Omg awesome poem!!! 5/5 i love the part with the angel!
~*~Skye~*~

Wow how wonderful your poem is.... i really love it

The end was kinda funny

ur work was great!!!!!

Wonderful flow of writing each word melting into the next well done. xox sam

Another write that leaves one wanting more from you. The flow was amazing.

Wow!!! totally and suberb i really like it!! it was very unique and the meaning were deep!! I really enjoy it even the flow is as soft as velvet. great poem! Keep it up