Thats very sad but you have made a good job with this poem and i hope things improve for you xxx

Awww this is a very sad poem, but i defintely love it and i can relate to it, so i'm adding it to my favorites.
but the way you wrote this was amazing. keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

5/5 lovely poem
love
amy

This is really pretty, but really sad. everything flows very well. keep it up 5/5 =]

Excellently written. A true masterpiece, flawless. You have excellent talent and i hope to see more such art in the future. 5/5.