Another great poem by you dear, this was great as always,
you have done another great job

Wow very dark and creative subject to go on a very strong message and the passion for the poem was felt
see i beleive in demons and angels and i can understand this poem great job 5/5

laura

I thought it was creative, the fact that it didnt rhyme was good, and i thought overall it was a good piece of writing
well done
xxxxx

Unique piece, it is really good. I like the flow in it.
My favorite lines are:
-They speak a language
a simpleminded mortal could never understand-

This is amazing. I like it from the beginning to the end. It has superb imagery. I like the topic too. This is your best poem that I read so far. You picked the words incredible.

This really caught my attention.

Hands down one of my favorites by you.

5=]

Not quite sure I'm getting this poem, although I've never been that good at understanding metaphors.
It's got a very eerie feel to it.