Comments : The Depth of my Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    How endearing. The way you've written this, by way of expressing one's feelings/thoughts within your words, was rather enchanting. Indeed, there are volumes of interpretations in between the lines, notably self-delusionment concerning matters of the heart and etc. I find it rather emotive and dreary, though.

    A lovely piece, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing! ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Extremely superb. The freeverse poetic form is best used in this piece. Well expressed and well penned. Its really awesome dear. You owe 5/5 from me.

    Coming clean in a sense of fate,
    Corruption echos in my heart.
    Dying slowly of heart break,
    Crying no longer heals wounds.

    Catching lines